On 3/7/2021 9:14 AM, BryanGSimmons wrote:
> On 3/4/2021 9:16 AM, Gary wrote:
>> BryanGSimmons wrote:
>>> Actually, there is a sub-plot in *Winter's Present* that deals with
>>> revenge. It's undoubtedly the most offensive (only offensive?) thing
>>> in the novel.
>>
>> If you would, go ahead and quote that Bryan.
>> Revenge seems to be your passion. Not real revenge but imagined
>> scenarios about revenge.
>>
>> That might have been good but I never read that far.
>>
>> It should have a conflict, a reaction, then a conclusion.
>> Hopefully focused on actions and not so much conversations.
>>
>> Many of the better novels have many sub-plots, ie stories within the
>> story.
>>
>>
>>
> I assumed this was the real Gary.

Yep, it was me and thanks for posting. I'm almost finished reading. Give
me another day or two then I'll get back to you.