On 3/4/2021 9:16 AM, Gary wrote:
> Â*BryanGSimmons wrote:
>> Actually, there is a sub-plot in *Winter's Present* that deals with
>> revenge.Â* It's undoubtedly the most offensive (only offensive?) thing
>> in the novel.
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> If you would, go ahead and quote that Bryan.
> Revenge seems to be your passion. Not real revenge but imagined
> scenarios about revenge.
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> That might have been good but I never read that far.
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> It should have a conflict, a reaction, then a conclusion.
> Hopefully focused on actions and not so much conversations.
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> Many of the better novels have many sub-plots, ie stories within the story.
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I assumed this was the real Gary.

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