BryanGSimmons wrote:
> Actually, there is a sub-plot in *Winter's Present* that deals with
> revenge. It's undoubtedly the most offensive (only offensive?) thing
> in the novel.

If you would, go ahead and quote that Bryan.
Revenge seems to be your passion. Not real revenge but imagined
scenarios about revenge.

That might have been good but I never read that far.

It should have a conflict, a reaction, then a conclusion.
Hopefully focused on actions and not so much conversations.

Many of the better novels have many sub-plots, ie stories within the story.