On Fri, 09 May 2008 10:16:57 -0700, dull knife
> wrote:

>In article >, sf wrote:
>
>> On Thu, 08 May 2008 10:26:27 -0700, dull knife
>> > wrote:
>>
>> >Most places around here co-mingle tips, so that means the cook got
>> >some of it. I hope he uses his share to attend a cooking school.
>>
>> Revise that sentence and it will be a really good line in your new
>> "review".
>
>I hope the cook uses his share of the co-mingled tips to attend a
>cooking school.
>
>?

perfect!


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