On Fri, 09 May 2008 13:32:39 GMT, hahabogus > wrote:

>Janet Wilder > wrote in news:48244ef3$0$7235$c3e8da3
:
>
>> Reverse the first and second sentences. Rewrite the third sentence so
>> it's not so personal. Leave out the last two sentences.
>>
>> You have your homework assignment.
>>
>> Texas Janet
>> --
>> Janet Wilder
>> Bad spelling. Bad punctuation
>> Good Friends. Good Life
>>
>>
>
>plonk

i didn't think much of her improvements either, but i wouldn't grade
her *that* hard.

your pal,
blake